Professional Literary Developmental Editing

Developmental/Line Editing Services

EB provides comprehensive developmental and line editing services to help authors refine their manuscripts and achieve their publishing goals. She utilize Microsoft Word's Track Changes feature on OneDrive for seamless collaboration and clear communication throughout the editing process.

Services Offered:

1. Developmental Editing:

• Big-Picture Analysis:
• Evaluation of overall story structure, plot, pacing, and character development.
• Identification of plot holes, inconsistencies, and areas for improvement.
• Assessment of the manuscript's target audience and marketability.
• Character Development:
• Analysis of character arcs, motivations, and believability.
• Suggestions for strengthening character development and creating compelling characters.
• Plot and Structure:
• Evaluation of plot coherence, pacing, and narrative flow.
• Recommendations for improving plot structure and creating a more engaging story.
• Theme and Message:
• Analysis of the manuscript's underlying themes and messages.
• Suggestions for clarifying and strengthening the thematic elements.
• Feedback and Guidance:
• Detailed editorial letter outlining strengths and weaknesses of the manuscript.
• Specific suggestions for revisions and improvements.
• Guidance on overall narrative effectiveness.

2. Line Editing:

• Sentence-Level Refinement:
• Improvement of sentence structure, clarity, and flow.
• Enhancement of word choice and style.
• Style and Tone:
• Ensuring consistency in style and tone throughout the manuscript.
• Refinement of voice and language to suit the target audience and genre.
• Clarity and Conciseness:
• Elimination of unnecessary words and phrases.
• Improvement of clarity and conciseness in writing.
• Pacing and Rhythm:
• Fine tuning the rhythm of the language.
• Checking for proper pacing within sentences and paragraphs.

Collaboration and Communication:

• Microsoft Word Track Changes:
• All edits and comments are made using Microsoft Word's Track Changes feature.
• This allows authors to easily review and accept or reject changes.
• OneDrive Integration:
• Manuscripts are shared via OneDrive for real-time collaboration and easy access.
• This allows for clear and organized comment tracking.
• Communication:
• Open communication is encouraged.
• Questions are welcomed.

Pricing (Focus on Developmental Packages):

EB believes in fostering a collaborative and developmental editing process. To maximize your learning and ensure each stage receives focused attention, we offer packages up to 10,000 words. This allows for concentrated feedback and revisions, promoting growth as a writer.

• 5,000 Word Package: $75
• Ideal for short stories, chapters, or initial manuscript sections.
• Provides targeted feedback on core elements like plot, character, and structure.
• 10,000 Word Package: $150
• Suitable for longer chapters, novellas, or early drafts of larger works.
• Allows for a more in-depth exploration of developmental and line editing needs.

Why Focus on Smaller Packages?

• Iterative Learning: Enables authors to receive feedback and implement revisions in manageable chunks.
• Cost-Effective Development: Reduces the upfront investment, allowing for a phased approach to editing.
• Focused Attention: Ensures each section of your manuscript receives thorough and detailed feedback.
• Prevent Overwhelm: smaller packages prevent the feeling of being overwhelmed by a massive amount of edits.

Analysis Video Add-on:

EB will record her live reactions while reading and editing the submitted work. When a comment or suggestion is made, EB will provide a more in-depth explanation to further clarify the advice. The video will remain private so it can only be viewed by the writer and EB.

Reach out if you have questions!